your copy sucks. how to improve it:

Hey-Hey-Hey brother !

As we all know…

Copy is one of the most important things you should master, if you actually want to make BIG MONEY.

Now, I know that a lot of you guys are Business Owners themselves, or are at least on their way to become one… 

So I decided to share some tips with you, so you don’t miss out on thousand’s of $$$ every month.

I mean, there’s a reason why every 7-figure business spends 10s of THOUSANDS of dollars for a copywriter, to max out their revenue.

But now… let’s get starred.

Tip #1

Always use ratios - avoid percentages.

Why ?

Let me give you a quick example.

You are a Fitness Coach, who wants to sell his Fitness program to as many people as possible…

So you write a sales email, to show your audience how important Fitness actually is.

Which snippet has more impact ?

“The XYZ study has shown, that 80% of society who are not into fitness, die in average 9 years earlier, than 20% of who are into fitness.”

Or

“The XYZ study has shown, that 8 out of 10 people die in average 9 years earlier, just because of a lack of fitness. ”

Now…

What actually happens here, is that your brain thinks:

‘F*ck… these are shocking numbers - I am one of the guys who live almost 10 years less. Maybe I should get a fitness coach to fix that.’

And besides that…

It is MUCH EASIER for your reader to digest the information.

Aka: More Impact which means More clients.

Tip #2

This is something you’ve already heard a lot of times:

“My proven fat-loss method will make you lose 11kg in just 8 weeks…

So if you want to have a beach body until September… Click the link.

PS: And no…

It’s NOT doing cardio, swallowing a ton of pills, or starving.”

You know what I did here ?

With saying what it’s NOT, I made you curious because it’s literally everything you’ve expected it to be.

And as we all know… Curiosity drives traffic.

But let’s, get over to the last one…

Tip #3

You know it…

Sometimes we have to pitch our product.

I mean, we’re here for the money, right ?

So, after making a pitch you can add a PS saying what they should do AFTER they …for example… signed up to your mentorship.

This is how it could look like:

“P.S: After signing up to the mentorship, please open the email I’ll send you and follow the steps given.”

It basically increases the conversion rate, because your reader thinks…

‘Wow, he is so sure that I will click the link, that he already gives me the next steps… it MUST be good.’

And that’s basically it.

BUT

Of course this was only 1% of the knowledge I have.

And 1% knowledge will only give you 1% of the results.

Which I know is not much….

And if you are actually serious with business.

You shouldn't be satisfied with only 1%.

You should strive for the FULL 100%.

“Yeah Alex stop yapping and show us the 100%.”

Sorry it's not that easy.

I don't want beehive to ban me for too much free value.

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And the best part? 

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What do you get out of this? 

3 NEW high ticket clients every single month.

All of that without the daily hassle of sending out 1000’s of ColdDM’s just to get ignored or rejected.

SO IF YOU…

Are tired of your current situation…

Want to get 3 NEW clients every MONTH…

Want to save ENDLESS hours every week…

And finally scale your business on autopilot…

WITHOUT WASTING TIME DMING PEOPLE WHO DON’T WANT TO TALK TO YOU.

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And we will see if we are a good fit. 

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